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=This is a new one i just started...= __Prologue__ I stopped and stared at the emptiness beneath me. //Was this really all death was?// Truthfully, it was boring. I had been wandering around through the plain whiteness for days. DAYS! With no sign of life other than me, I felt hopeless. It was terrible. I never deserved this. Well, there was that one time when I put glue in my sister’s hair… but still! I shouldn’t be here. I tried calling walking around. I tried calling for help. Nothing worked! So I gave up. I sat down and gave in to the nothingness.

__Chapter 1__ (1 month before) “No.”

“Do your homework.”

“N-O”

“Fine. No electronics.”

“Wait you can’t-please-stop! Noooooo”

She grabbed my laptop, phone, and kindle and started walking.

“That’s what you get. Now do your homework or they’ll be gone for even longer.”

“Fine,” I said sullenly.

I took out my binder and started working…or pretended to. //Why are my parents always so strict?! Agh.// I sat back and started to pretend to write while thinking about Devon my boyfriend. My parents didn’t know we were dating, but that was okay. I could lie… Besides they didn’t seem to care about how often I hung out with him.

I was interrupted from my thoughts by my mom’s screaming.

“Vivian! Vivian Teresa Meyer! Snap out of it!”

“You have no work on this page! Why is that?”

“Because it’s not my homework,” I lied “This is my homework.” I flipped to what we had did in class today.

“So you’re saying that you are done with ALL of your homework?!”

“Yes.”

“Fine. Go set the table for dinner.”

“Can I at least have my electronics back?”

“No.”

“Pleaseeeeeee! I’ll never do it again!” I said even though I had no idea what I had done.

“No. And that’s final.”

“But I need my computer for homework!” I lied, I would do anything for my electronics.

“//Oh really?// Still a no.”

“Why? I //need// it.”

“Because one, you said you were finished homework. And two, you have been very rude lately and I don’t approve. And if you weren’t lying about needing it for homework, then you'll just have to tell the teacher that you were rude and you got it taken away.”

“But-“

“No buts. Go set the table this instant."

"Idiot," I muttered under my breath.

__Chapter 2__
 * BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP*

I rolled over and sluggishly slammed my fist down on the snooze button and went back to sleep. Five minutes later my mom came in and woke me up. Or at least, tried to.

"Vivian...Time to get up!" she said happily.

I was still ticked off about my electronics, so i didn't answer. Her happiness was //killing// me.

"Go awayyyyy," I picked up a pillow and lazily threw it in the direction of her voice.

She stormed over to my bed and ripped off my covers. "GET. OUT. OF. BED. NOW."

At that point I had no choice. She wasn't giving my covers back anytime soon. I slowly pulled myself into a sitting position and shooed her away, "I'm up. Go away."

"Don't talk to me like that!"

"Like what?! I didn't even do anything. UHHH."

"Stop with the attitude missy."

"I like dad better," I muttered angrily.

"Good."

"Good," I said mock sweetly. //Uhhhhhh...//she could be sooo annoying sometimes.

I got up, took a shower, got dressed, packed my bag, and headed out the door to my driveway where the bus picked me up. The bus ride was short. I talked with my best friend Amber the whole time. When we got to school I went straight to my locker and got my stuff.

"Hey!" said my locker buddy, Hazel. She was mega-popular and super nice.

My other locker budy, Rose walked up, "Hey!"

"Hi guys. Ready to get to class?" I had already packed all my stuff up and was getting up.

"Yep. See you there," Rose said, but i was already walking away.

I walked into homeroom

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= = = = = = = = = = =Prolouge (Tell me what you think and give suggestions for what should happen next.)= Pixie Trix was a fairly normal girl exept for one little thing...she was a witch. All the other kids at her school were Vampires. Normal, blood-sucking vampires. Pixie-given her name- thought that she would be much better as a fairy...or even a shapeshifter but //noooo// but she was cursed with being a witch. Yes that came with all the cool powers and easy ways to do things, but she had to learn about vampire history. Bo-ring....! So Pixie wasn't a very happy girl. Not at all. She trudged through school with a grimace on her face and a stack of vampire books in her hands. And the worst part... Pixie had no friends. NONE AT ALL! Until one day that all changed....

Maybe a witch

Thanks for the comment. I'll use that idea.

=__Alone__=

Post thoughts and ideas on what to write next! :)
====I stared out the window and watched the raindrops slide down it gracefully. //Another crappy day... there have been too many of those lately,// I thought drearily//.// Oh the wonders of Alaska.It was rainy, isolated and away from the world. God, I hated this. Back at home I was one of the popular crowd, with my pretty blonde hair and blue eyes, I fit in easily. But here was a whole different story. I was an outcast. No one to sit with at lunch... no one to hangout with in my free period. And no one to call when i was bored. It was terrible, and i was miserable. The other bad part was the rain. Oh the rain....! I loved nature, and right now I couldn't go outside and soak in the sun, which was killing me!====

I would suggest you next explain why the character is in Alaska. You built up good wonderment for the reader but it is time to explain it. (This story sounds a bit similar to the start of Twilight. Just be careful to be original. Mrs. S